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PostSubject: not done   Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:47 pm

Lit up eyes
A shining smile.
A laughing heart,
Pure gold.
She was always good at
deceiving.
She was always good at
lying.
She could mask it all up,
Make it all seem ok,
But when the lights went dim at the end of the day,
The monster came out,
She unleashed his fury.

All she wanted was someone to understand,
To get it right, to know it was out of hand.
She sang a song of pain and glory,
A heartwrenching tune of a lonely girl stuck in the middle of a life gone astray.
But no one could hear her story

And the only way out was through the pain,
The same pain that held her prisoner,
The same pain she cried at night,
The pain it hurt too much to say.

The edge was silver,
Crisp, sharp and clean.
It glistened in the light,
dancing on the walls.
The door was closed,
Shut, private and concealing.
It hid her away from all the world.
Gently, now, she sings,
Start out slow.
Deeper and deeper, let it all go.
The pain slips away as the edge slips in,
One perfect line,
Straight, red and bleeding,
A good pain, she calls it,
It cancels out all the others.
Satisfied, she starts again,
Satisfied, a new scar forms again,
Satisfied, the cycle starts over again.


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PostSubject: Re: not done   Tue Nov 24, 2009 10:00 pm

sad :( But really good!
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PostSubject: Re: not done   Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:38 am

Aww! That's sad! =( But very well written.
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