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PostSubject: My Own Written Songs   Thu Aug 20, 2009 9:21 pm

Okay. Idk if this is in the right Forum, but I guessed here. Anyways, lately, i've been into music again and I have started writing songs all over again. So I wrote a really intense one last night and I decided I would share my music with you guys! Let me know what you guys think, but don't be too harsh. I'll add songs here and there. Thanks!

Song 1: "Beautiful Road"

Verse 1(Girl Solo):
Boy, i'm sitting here, strumming my guitar, wishing upon a star.
Oh boy, the volcano will errupt, the passion will flood,
but i'll never know where to go.
I'm so confused, scared of what path to take,
right or left, north or south, love or pain.

Pre-Chorus:
The stake your driving through my heart,
it's leaving a permanent scar,
and I don't know how much hurt it can take.

Chorus:
Maybe we should quit, it's outta control.
Maybe we should stop and take the toll.
Baby I know, neither of us can let go,
but all I know, is this is the end of a beautiful road(beautiful road).
Verse 2(Boy Solo):
Girl, i'm sitting here alone, looking in mirror, wishing I could see myself clearer.
Oh girl, I think you still have my beating heart,
though we're many miles and miles apart.
I'm wishing I was a better guy, I should've treated you right,
cherished you and loved you, the way a typical guy should.

Pre-Chorus:
The stake I drove through your heart,
didn't mean for a permanent scar,
and I didn't want to hurt you that much.

Chorus(Boy and Girl):
Maybe we should quit, it's outta control.
Maybe we should stop and take the toll.
Baby I know, neither of us can let go,
but all I know, is this is the end of a beautiful road(beautiful road).

Bridge:
(Girl)
It's too late, your plan for my heart to seperate,
the way you took time to getaway and leave me hanging!
(Boy)
Let me in, and I can ease your pain!
I'm not as bad as they say!
(Girl)
The harsh words you said to me, drove me away, and I don't give a darn anymore!

Chorus(Girl Only):
Maybe we should quit, it's outta control.
Maybe we should stop and take the toll.
Baby I know!
(Boy and Girl)
Maybe we should quit, it's outta control.
Maybe we should stop and take the toll.
Baby I know, neither of us can let go,
but all I know, is this is the end of a beautiful road(beautiful road).
(Girl)
Maybe we should quit, it's outta control.
(I'm sitting here alone, looking in mirror, wishing I could see myself clearer)
Maybe we should stop and take the toll.
(Oh girl, I think you still have my beating heart)
Baby I know, neither of us can let go,
(Though we're miles and miles apart.....)
(Boy and Girl) but all I know, is this is the end of a beautiful road(beautiful road).


Song 2: "Lived A Lie"
Verse 1:
You swore that you would never leave,
Made me promise i'd believe,
I closed my eyes and said "I do"(I do).
You took my hand and put it in yours,
Yet I didn't know all you thought about were those whores,
You were dancing with last night!

Pre-Chorus:
Friday night, I looked at the clock.
Couldn't believe it, I was in shock.
How could you let this happen,
it's like we're reliving in the past.

Chorus:
All this time, was just another one of your perfect lies,
I thought for once i'd found the one that wouldn't make me cry!
But as far as I can tell,
Your name doesn't even ring a bell.
Don't even bother ask why,
Because you know you lived a lie.

Verse 2:
Took your pictures, burned them,
They were no longer a gem,
I closed my eyes and said "goodbye"(goodbye).
Took that jacket you lent me,
It's no longer a sweet memory,
You left me in misery!

Pre-Chorus:
Friday night, I looked at the clock.
Couldn't believe it, I was in shock.
How could you let this happen,
it's like we're reliving in the past.

Chorus:
All this time, was just another one of your perfect lies,
I thought for once i'd found the one that wouldn't make me cry!
But as far as I can tell,
Your name doesn't even ring a bell.
Don't even bother ask why,
Because you know you lived a lie.

Bridge:
I can almost see, the time that you first met me.
Our eyes met, hearts clicked, it was decency!(x2)

Pre-Chorus:
Friday night, I looked at the clock.
Couldn't believe it, I was in shock.
How could you let this happen,
it's like we're reliving in the past.

Chorus:
All this time, was just another one of your perfect lies,
I thought for once i'd found the one that wouldn't make me cry!
But as far as I can tell,
Your name doesn't even ring a bell.
Don't even bother ask why!

Chorus:
All this time, was just another one of your perfect lies,
I thought for once i'd found the one that wouldn't make me cry!
But as far as I can tell,
Your name doesn't even ring a bell.
Don't even bother ask why,
Because you know you lived a lie.(x2)


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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:03 pm

wow. that's good. really good.

If you're thinking what I'm thinking, a girl with a bright country voice should sing it, and it should start out with the girl strumming her guitar, and looking up at the sun xD

The guy, of course, should be hot. Kris Allen could sing it; he'd be good lol

Yeah. I'm very random.
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:29 pm

Did you write the just lyrics, or the music, too?
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:39 pm

Just the lyrics. I suck at writing music. If anyone here knows how to right music feel free to show me it. Haha

Thanks Hanna!
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:18 am

It's a bit more complicated then telling you over the internet. >.<
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:18 am

I know, but still. You could write the music and like play it and send it or something.
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 3:35 am

i can't write music for my life, lol.
i just play random notes on the piano that seem to fit.

[moved this to music!]
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:57 am

Definitely. I like the lyrics a lot, actually. Smile Two things that struck me when I was humming through:
"Volcano will erupt" is very awkward to sing,
"I don't give a darn" is just odd. I don't really care would work better.
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:59 am

Thanks.

It's not actually "darn". It's really supposed to be d*mn, but it like changed when I posted it here cuz of the word sensoring.
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:11 am

I figured that, too, but it's just awkward. Great job, again, and I hope to see more.
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PostSubject: Re: My Own Written Songs   Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:39 am

Thanks! I added a new song! Just wrote it. Haha.
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