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PostSubject: Poems by Natalie!   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:22 am

Okay. So for some reason, I have been getting into writing shortpoems lately! So i'll be posting them here once in a while, so check back! Here's my first one:
"Love Is Like A Potion"
Love is like a potion,
With all its crazy motion.
Ups and Downs,
Smiles and Frowns.
It releases powerful emotions.
Love is like a potion.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by Natalie!   Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:22 am

Not exactly high level philosophy, but it's good. Did you just pick potion because it rhymes with motion? I guess it makes sense. You never know what a potion might do... turn you into a frog, make you really tall, etc. And you never know what love might do. Very good and cute.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by Natalie!   Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:27 am

good, cute =) but you know poems don't have to rhyme right?
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PostSubject: Re: Poems by Natalie!   Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:31 am

Thanks Sunny!

Thanks Jors! And yea I do, but I find rhyming easier 4 me. Haha
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