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PostSubject: Please Read.   Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:44 am

This is just a short simple song I just wrote up the past few minutes. I'd really appreciate if you would comment on it, but no negative comments please. This song is really special. I hope you like it:

Verse 1 :
You always trusted me.
I always trusted you.
You knew I wouldn't let you down,
you'd spare a chance for me.
Until that day, my heart flew away,
I hurt you, turned the knife,
You had walked away.

I begged and pleaded all I could,
You gave me forgiveness I didnt deserve,
So now all I say, is

Chorus:
I'm sorry for backstabbing you.
I'm sorry for goin' against you.
I should've known better, I was so wrong, you were so right.
I'm sorry for all the things i'd do.
I didn't mean for them to hurt you so bad.
I'm sorry.........to you.

Bridge:
Ohhhhh!
I wasn't thinking.
Pushing away all our friendship, leading into jealousy(jealousy).
I don't wanna say goodbye, cuz I still want you to be mine(hold out for 5 seconds longer)

Chorus:
I'm sorry for backstabbing you.
I'm sorry for goin' against you.
I should've known better, I was so wrong, you were so right!

I'm sorry for backstabbing you.
(You always trusted me, I always trusted you!)
I'm sorry for goin' against you.
(You knew I wouldn't let you down!)
I should've known better, I was so wrong, you were so right.
(Until that day my heart flew away!)
I'm sorry for all the things i'd do.
(I hurt you! Turned the knife!)
I didn't mean for them to hurt you so bad.
(You had walked away!)
I'm sorry.........I made you frown. Oooohh. Yeaaa........

Dedicated to Lola/Vivianne.
Written and Melodized by Natalie.
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:17 am

awwwww thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:05 am

Mhmm. I truly am sorry for telling Rose. I know you didn't forgive me before(or i thought u had but u rly didnt) but I still am hoping you will.
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:14 am

i know, but idk if i can forgive you.
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:24 am

Look at these. Please:

When you hold resentment toward another, you are bound to that person or condition by an emotional link that is stronger than steel. Forgiveness is the only way to dissolve that link and get free.

There is no love without forgiveness, and there is no forgiveness without love.

To forgive is the highest, most beautiful form of love. In return, you will receive untold peace and happiness.

Always forgive your enemies - nothing annoys them so much.

To forgive is to set a prisoner free and discover that the prisoner was you.

The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong.

You can't undo anything you've already done, but you can face up to it. You can tell the truth. You can seek forgiveness. And then let God do the rest.

Sincere forgiveness isn't colored with expectations that the other person apologize or change. Don't worry whether or not they finally understand you. Love them and release them. Life feeds back truth to people in its own way and time.

The stupid neither forgive nor forget; the naive forgive and forget; the wise forgive but do not forget.
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:21 am

[whats with the avvie?? doens't seem like you]

fiine, i guess i kinda forgive you
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:30 am

(Scene Hair. I<3 it!)

Kinda? Lola(wht should i call u?), I love u like a real best friend i see everyday. I dont wanna lose u. People made mistakes, i made a HUGE one, but i still want us to be close and 4 u 2 forgive me.
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:15 am

xoxogossipgirl wrote:
(Scene Hair. I<3 it!)

Kinda? Lola(wht should i call u?), I love u like a real best friend i see everyday. I dont wanna lose u. People made mistakes, i made a HUGE one, but i still want us to be close and 4 u 2 forgive me.

[just got interested in it?]

it's an amazing song, natalie!
and i'm impressed that you came up with it in a few minutes.
cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:17 am

Haha. So was I! I just sang and looked for words tht fit and rhymed. HAHA

(pretty much!)
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:56 am

i wanna hear a melody, natalie!
do you know anyone who writes music?
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PostSubject: Re: Please Read.   Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:57 am

Sadly, no.
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