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Which of my two stories do you like the best?
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Story #2
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I really didnt think either was very good.
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PostSubject: Story #2   Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:46 am

Chapter One: The Rebel Prince


Attorex. The name that strikes fear in the very soul of the people of Orrin. The people hate their king Attorex and none dare speak the name louder than a whisper. The land of Orrin is polluted so there is little produce and most of the animals have died of starvation. Any kind of food is given to the king in exchange for their lives. The Attorex’s son was named Jeraud and was also known as the rebel prince because he stole from his father(mostly food) and gave to his people. In defiance to his father he had fallen in love with a village girl named Meggie.
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Jeraud crept to the castle grounds to the stables untying a black throughbred named Bella. He saddled her and swung his leg over her back and galloped her silently through the moonlit night. Once to her small houpse he tied her up to a nearby tree and knocked li;ghtly on her maple wood door.”

“Meggie!” he whispered quietly.
A tall light brown haired girl opened the door a crack slipping through and he grabbed her hand pulling her into the shadowas of the trees as she flew her arms around him.
“I missed you! Where have you been?” she asked keeping her voice down.
“My father’s been keeping a very close eye on me. But enough of him. How does a moonlit ride in the clearing sound?” he asked smiling
She smiled in return nodding happily as they mounted the horse trotting gracefully into the night.
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Okay so this was my second story but please dont vote until i have posted more of both!!
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PostSubject: Re: Story #2   Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:49 am

#1 then.
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