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PostSubject: Story #1   Fri Jul 18, 2008 4:17 am

Chapter One: The Assignment


King Caspians special wolf trackers were highly skilled and trained for the King’s many “special” tasks. He has called upon them again for a certain reason. An old butler of his, James Hale, had witnessed something that only the king and James knew. So now that he had run away from him he needed to be tracked,and killed.
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“Manghral!” the king shouted.
“My king.” said a gray wolf appearing from behind the throne room doors. Two other wolves appeared behind him. Their names, Brook and Eli. Brook was the only female in the pack and by far the best tracker. Eli was Brooks brother and he was much broader and more muscled.
“Go into Berling Forests and track a man called James Hale. Once you catch him, kill him.” he said ruthlessly.
“K-kill him?” Brook stuttered.
“Will that be a problem for you my lovely Brook?” he asked his eyes turning a deep red.
“N-no my king. We will find him.” she said not very confidently.
“Good. Now leave me!” he bellowed
The three wolves dipped their heads and backed out of the castle running south toward the Berling river. “Well I suppoes that we’ll have to swim across.Since that stupid king of ours just had to pick the time when the river was at its highest point.
“Quiet Brook! We’re still close to the palace!” said Eli superstitiously
Brook growled sepping into the icy water and started swimming confidently across the wide river.While eli and Manghral followed more cautiously and climbed out into the forest.
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what do u guys think? i have two stories and i dont know which one i will keep working on. this is only a little bit of my first one.... and ill post more later.

Im working on typing my second still but i havent named either yet.


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PostSubject: Re: Story #1   Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:05 am

It's so iintgreaging! (yea i spelled it wrong...) but i love it.
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PostSubject: Re: Story #1   Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:20 am

do you mean intriguing?
i love it:D
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PostSubject: Re: Story #1   Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:24 am

thank you guys so much! im gonna post my second but it will be in its own thread with a poll
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